Incest/Taboo Story Comments

You A/N are longer than the actual story here. 3 stars and going down

Wow, so dramatic and sexy. Seems like he has filled her up with babymakers. Eager to read more please. A cliffhanger like this in cruel to your readers.

You go from 1st person "I" as the mother, to 2nd/3rd person "Karen" as the mother.

That ruined it for me. Shame.... and story started out way t fast and aggressive, no real build up.

These stories are ALWaYS best in 1st person writing...

Perfect story that begs for more chapters. Naturally both attend the same college next year and live together to save money. Mom loves that her children are happy and doesn’t care what they as they are happy. Thank you

This is great, can't wait for more of Cotton Eyed Joe

Another great chapter 5 stars

Out-freakin-standing !!!!!

This story is fantastic, really great and I am excited by your comment below about 12-14 chapters.

A small hopefully constructive criticism, when the story went to Ireland in the Middle ages, the characters mostly spoke like they came from that era then would pop into current style...

Oseeker, thanks for your comment. Evidently our sweet horny Susan has proven herself to be a quick learner.

more of this story please

Came for incest stayed for Edwin getting due punishment

Love this series. Can't wait for more. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Badly composed. Badly told. Nothing, from the first keystroke to the end, was enjoyable.

All of that explains why nobody has elected to follow you. Nobody wants to read more of whatever you call this. It's not writing, that's for sure.

If I were you, and thank god I'm not, is have...

loved it, only wish it would have included some spanking also.

For my tastes you thru in too many new possibilities. If they all stick around I will get confused, but that's just me

GREAT story !!! I LOVED it !!! Please write more like it !!!

Nice story well prese ted. I thought them in bed the day after the funeral was 'cold' and heartless but it made for part of the overall reality

You might be getting worse at this writing thing.

Excellent series! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Chapter 2,3,4? Love it.

I had been married eleven years when my dad and I had our first experience not unlike this. We had wanted each other for years. We were insatiable once we started. His cock deep in my pussy and in my mouth. We couldn't get enough of each other. It was an amazing addiction. It is almost...

Wow... Just Wow! Great short story.

Sister love is amazing

Cousin love is amazing

Just never been with them concurrently. Our cousin wouldn't mind, but my sister would not go for it.

Amazing story. Eager to read the part 2

Was hoping for a brother or son not dad

I like it, but it's a pity chapters are so short...

I feel like this was an amasing end and we dont really need a sequel. Anything else is just goilg to feel like a repeat unless you can somehow ramp it somehow, maybe have Kayla get involved next time.

Awesome! So much like I experienced, It's actually quite amazing the similarities. My dad's cock in me was the best. To this day, the memories still take my breath away.

Hot story. Need next part.

English is not your first language, is it? It's OK, you have a good premise and with a good editor you should be fine. An editor is crucial for you though. 3/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Never has any text made me reach a climax this intense

I feel like she should have wanted him to cum in her pussy instead of this obsession with her ass. She should also have mentioned giving him a family as well if she intends to be his girlfriend long-term. Maybe mentions about moving away and living as husband and wife. I think that...

Six pages of build up, over and over again to the point I was temped to jump to the last page by the begging of the third page. All of that build up for so little pay off. Thought at the least there could have been a part two. Definitely could have cut it off ate the fourth page if...

Very good story!!!!!!!!!

Great story. I am disappointed in the pregnancy part at the end but I was glued to reading it

For a couple of girls who'd never watched porn before they got educated rather quickly knowing about 'cowgirl' positions & vibrators for a boy's ass, etc.

But the story was wickedly delightful & I sure wish that MY 1st time was with two horny girls....

5 stars in spite of the knowledge...