Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

Once more you have delivered an excellent story. Thank you

Excellent and arousing!

Ignore (some) of the critical comments.

I enjoyed it, good length and about the right amount of sex if you are trying not tell a real story.

It took a long while to get going, but that's okay.

I appreciated the Carver character's humor.

One thing I would change is James' character....

This was HOT!!! And SEXY! And portends of more chapters. But it appears you've stopped it. Damn!

Oh, and you spelled "waist" wrong.

Unless she became lax in her faith living in England all those years, there would be no lush bush, flecked with grey or otherwise. Common mistake many authors make due to the unibrow, but practicing Muslim women are bare from the neck down. The prophet Mohammed commands it. Still...

To be continued my ass

A truly enjoyable story!!!!!!!!!!

Well done as with all your stories. More would be amazing!

so much for being married as a chastity device or marriage vow saver. rk

Please continue!

So hot!

Really enjoy the "Period Language"... Saucy Lady... keep the story flowing...

Very nice!

Interesting, looking forward to reading about their developing relationship.

Very sweet and sexy story. Well Done. !!

An imaginatively constructed story that was engaging. It was easy to imagine the thoughts and ambitions of both characters. Of course, one evident question concerned the novice woman: can a mature, married woman really be this inexperienced, this naive???? Well done! Thanks for...

Exquisite love story, compelling and so well written

Plus tres erotic

Great, you men out there that are thinking of entering into a marriage, this is NOT 🚫 just a fictional story. This kinda thing happens all the time, you think you can really know a person, (you CAN NOT) we have no idea just how truly deceitful and cruel the human heart is or what...

Why do people not read their stories before submitting them?

Mrs Monroe became Mrs Walker!

Clichèd rubbish again 1☆

Hmmmm. I liked the first 3-parts up until you introduced the old skinny guy. The story degenerated from there. It went from hot to ridiculous very quickly. It just felt like you wanted to extend the story.

5 stars and a great story. Thank you to the author. I'm not sure I'm fully on board with the reconciliation, and definitely wish the epilogue included some major karma for the exes, but that's just missing extra credit :)

That is "2" WOWS, and MORE.

Great series can’t wait for the rest of the trip

Nice story. I'm going to read the follow-up now.

Really, really good story!!!!!!!!!!

More!

Thank you for the story. Age doesn't have to be an issue; once I was in love with a beautiful woman 18 years my senior, another with a woman 18 years my junior. I felt lucky in both cases!

somewhere east of Omaha

Great story please write more. The new one's you write them make them extemely talking dirty & fucking like no end in sight. Thnk-you

Thank you for your feedback anonymous user but, as it stands, I see criticism that is not constructive; therefore I'd like to ask, if you could, to please elaborate on the issues you brought up.

Why was the story poorly written? Was it confusing?

When did the flow of the story change,...

constant POV changes... the mark of someone that wants the reader constantly jarred out of immersion, or simply has no clue what 3rd person means.

Delightful!

It really needs a follow up. Hint hint....

I love your stories!

Really, really good story!!!!!!!!!

Five stars! A well written, teasing and erotic story. Mature, 45? LOL, put that in the MILF category. A story no doubt so many of us that have punched our tickets as a lover, wife and mother will relate to with a momentary smile, acknowledging our secret. Unlikely lovers, each...

I loved your story Beth! Kind of exciting with a let down ending. Hope there is a part2 in the works!