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No. The chastity bullshit ruined the story

great start! can't wait to see what's next!

Just finished what you have posted on discord. Very good story so far. Not the biggest tentacle reader, but very good so far. Hope you come back to this sometime soon!

I really enjoyed this. When will you post the next chapter?

You write great kinky scenes with amazing build up. but you seriously need help with continuity. In one page she has a T-shirt on the next she 'unbuttons' her shirt... Just to give out an example, there are several continuity errors.

Truly enjoy your work.

Just what every eighteen year old boy just out of high school, a baby, dirty diapers to change. Not to mention lack of sleep, spitting up, and then sick babies and teething. NO more parties, bills to pay insurance to purchase and doctor bills. Glad you let us no ahead of time what...

2nd chapter?

I really enjoyed this story. THANK YOU!!!

Damn it! You made me cry! I agree, gem of a story.

NP- best news ever. Can’t get enough of this story.

I'm more interested in finding out how much trouble Beth got into for disappearing for a day, and if she managed to salvage the situation with the storage unit.

I agree with most or the things brought up by the writer. I’ve been a voyeur many many years and the most exciting scenario has always been a Blackman having sex with my wife. There are many reasons for my preference with the first being him having a really thick long cock for her....

I enjoyed it. Not my preferred style of femdom, but I appreciate it for what it aspires to be. I'm interested to see where you take it from here! If you're interested in a challenge, then I'd challenge you to increase the degradation and humiliation without taking into the all-too-obvious...

I guess if you're going to burn your life down. You might as well use napalm.

3.5/5 last two chapters (rounded up to 4/5)

Definitely letdown after very good previous chapters. I hope bettervones to come

1. Dinner conversation was weird from all participants; whatever character flaws Jason will (apparently) display

2. While Jason is hinted to be shady, Sarah...

Am I the only one that can't count

Since he has a sister and the women are the dependence then wouldn't she be the last?

Just a mixed up dope and a couple f women not worth any effort to keep. Also ending makes the reader say WTF?

A deep and thoughtful narrative of consequences of infidelity. Besides the humiliation and shame, Leslie is lucky having concerned family and friends more helpful than her own wealthy parents. (Quo Vadis?)

The author seems to have a strange attitude towards cheating. A partner cheats not only when he has sex with another, but when he abuses his partner's trust. Even revealing intimate things about a relationship to a third party can be cheating.

And how he comes to the conclusion that...

You just don't deal that type of pain to someone that you claim to love.

Great Story. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the good work!

Enjoyable fantasy. Have to agree with thomashwhite comment. It appears that CS exposed to big risk of humiliation from BD. Only if BD was also blindfolded and had to wear earmuffs and not given further details would CS be at less risk. Perhaps, Annie's roommate or another girlfriend...

This was a perfect place for a nuclear BTB but the author is a wimpy cuck boy.

Omg, I leaked and leaked

The fart kinda killed it for me!

Good story. Interrogatory, Dad? Daddy? Jack's? Step-daddy? Just wondering.

hot fantasy where's the rest?

The literarary equivalent of blue balls, no finish and no idea if there will be

Frankly nothing pisses me off more than wasting my time reading a good story from start to finish and NO FINISH, it's one thing to know more chapters are coming, that's like coitus Interuptus, but seeing...

This was a very realistic story. Sometimes things don’t end in shouting and screaming……they just wither away.

Continue this!!!!!

Yeah, kind of missed out on Katy and the twins, how they were coping with the divorce

I think during the reciting of the matras it broke rule "8. The Cunt is not a person, it is a thing and will only use third person."

As a woman, I didn’t expect that any other woman actually thinks like me. I love them this age too. So delightful.

My problem with this is he has no backbone or self-respect. He should have had a PI on her right from the start so that he could divorce her after the first cock but it took another woman to force his hand and finally call an investigator. This guy is a doormat and shall continue...