Romance Story Comments

Loved the humour and the love shown in this story. Just another read

Truly amazing chapter. Your best one yet. Us critics may make an author out of you .😀

Loved it, back in the day I read a lot about the industry but decided I clearly wasn't endowed enough for front of camera or willing to give up a paying job to work behind the camera.

Axelotto

A great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Extremely well done. In the end it’s syrupy sweet, but it was fitting. Writing from inside the head of a man badly disfigured and emotionally broken, must have been difficult at times. Having a good woman by his side is a big confidence booster for any man.

Wonderful story!

5

It's a good one-off. There are a couple of typos, but nothing significant. Come v cum for one.

Read this again after years, I think, and found it was still delightful.

Apparently dear Anonymous you've never experienced real fear. Good for you, it's not fun. I'm not the little fear that keeps one hiding behind an anonymous ID, but real, gut wrenching fear that locks you up and twists your gut. You can sit there and say how brave you are but until...

Short and sweet. Would have like more but was happy with what I got. 5*

Usual quick ending, but still loved the series. 4.4* for this chapter - 4.7* for the entire series.

Pronouns make the story hard to follow.

Another great story. I liked the characters

You did it again with saga, but at least I wasn’t crying this chapter. I’m so glad you made this a romance and not a loving wives story. That would have killed the poor guy.

Now, photo shop? Time to send info to Sandra and the police. Time to verify the whereabouts of one Dumont at this very time. Time to sue the crap out of a lying POS!!

You have to admit that Dumont is very committed to being an asshole. That is a very long flight to Paris and finding a body double prostitute and getting backstage is a feat in itself. How will it affect him when he’s exposed to the world?

A beautiful ending to the tale

I guess the writer doesn't know the pain of being disappointed by ur spouse... Being on talking terms really?

You're wasting everyone's time with your failed attempts at writing.

John,

As always, you continue to exceed my expectations. You’re writing is heartfelt and well thought out. I’m one of many you mentioned that your stories helped get through hard times.

I continue to reread many of your works. I look forward to many more.

When you do get published,...

5*****

Once a cheater always a cheater

I think this is a great story.

Well played. Your statement about underpaid TA’s was great and would be even better if you would have spent a little more building the characters so our twist would be more of a surprise.

A little short but lovely 5*

Outstanding

Great story. Loved the characters & the happy ending.

A great love story! This was my second read, and it still touched my heart! Well Done

I’ll readily admit that I had to skim some of the abuse stuff…which tells me that it was very well written. John is the vilest villain I’ve encountered in my reading on this site, but it’s scary that there might really be people like him out IRL. Parts didn’t make sense to me, as...

I don't feel this is a romance, really.

Very good story, well written and will be reading this again in the future. Thanks for sharing

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very well done and deserves a five.

I loved your story Mr. Other! I've taken notice that your writing is on a parallel with my most favorite Author and that is only because he writes my favorite genre, Sci Fi! No, I'm really not into all the sex starved stories here at Literotica, I'm just a lover of great stories,...

The revisit of the storm rescue reminded me how much I didn't like it the first time all those chapters ago. Why on earth would a smart, tough survivor like Andi chose certain death over rescue? I'm a parent. I would NEVER choose certain death for my kids.

A perfect story and thank you so much for sharing it with us. I can’t wait to read the next series.