Comments on Novels and Novellas

"Broody" hahaha, I love it.

Yes, the Italian epidemic was significant, as it marked a significant mutation of the syphilis spirocet. Hitherto, syphilis yaws, beheld, mainly spread through skin contact and could be picked up by a scrape on an infected rock. Similar pathway to tetanus. However the Spanish insistence...

Was there some purpose to him taking horseback rides around the countryside, aside from him saying he just wanted to see different places so he wouldn't be bored while he was in Spoleto? Turns out that it is over 2 hours north of Rome by car or about 135 km. It would take about one...

Your Killing Me Smalls...

In a good way!!!

I check my damn phone all the time to see if you've posted another chapter...

Excellent!! Just Fucking Excellent!!!

Still want some more Varna or Three Sisters/Notomal after this Is done!!

However, this one is on Par with them!!!

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Fun story, but like "Jig07" I didn't see why the nudist thing was thrown in. Perhaps to show that some Brits are not uptight, but I kept wondering what it was going to lead to and it never came. Great story telling though, thanks.

Keep it going strong!

5

I am so loving this story. Thanks for the ride, and keep it going, PLEASE!

Axelotto

I hope Robert goes John wick on the people that took his family!!!

A maiden no more but a married whore for her husband only. I only wish I had found such a treasure when searching for the love of my life. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities...

Another winner! I like the characters very much.

5

another great story from Markelly. 5*

A very good series that just tailed off a little in the final instalment although still some very moving scenes.

Well, damn it! I never came back and left a longer comment as I promised! I must be losing it...

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Liesma Horseface must partially fulfill a comic relief need, as even Guenna doesn't consider her ugly. It is funny however when Giedra complains about Liesma because she is clearly...

Christ on a cross do I not care about anyone in this story. It's just history in between scenes of Pilgrim getting laid.

Mal is dead?

Somehow that doesn't quite seem what this cliffhanger is going to be about. Which leaves the option of him having a badly timed regeneration, while his wife gets frantic and starts wanting to be "serviced". The two women will have to deal with that while an oblivious...

Thank you for putting your writing out there. I am enjoying the storyline and the glimpse of Hawaiian culture immensely.

You write well, like your plot. The thoughts and spoken conversation switches add a lot of texture and details to the story.

You are very kind with your information sharing: I would not have discovered Percheron’s spin-off as quickly without your introduction. Thank you!

Also: as an old fut who went to high school in Hawaii but then left to go to college (never to return), the pidgin and Hawaiian words are a real trip down memory lane.

Pretty mature if Evie to understand that there is good and bad chocolate (and good and bad sex). Also struggling with a way to embrace Gwen and tell her it will be okay even though she clearly is uncomfortable with being embraced and told it is going to be okay.

arrrggg - kicking myself - OK I straight away twigged to Rocky McGill - must have read Nancy 5 times before the light went on, getting slow in my old age (PS Lil - nah got that straight away)

Thanks for a very touching and well written story!

what a way of taking a job interview

@Roman

Worry not...this author generally resolves most everything to many reader's satisfaction. He's really good at anticipating audience interaction and rarely drops something he doesn't later significantly address; even his cliffhangers all possess purpose, and usually when the...

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Great start!

Looove the Fanny reference!

11/10!!!!!

Interesting, but the sex is so over the top that at times it gets a bit tedious as it tries to ramp up even more. A couple more chapters and I expect windows to start exploding in wildly descriptive ways with the percussive nature of the fucking.

Plot twist. Let him keep Gina.

Ok that explains why Gwen when asexual. Hopefully the regen process will help out. But she might need some mental help to get use to those feelings again.

Missing the sex

I like the writing style, making it an exciting read and deserving of five stars, but the subject matter does not appeal to me. I think you could write good cop stories with less sex, and that would interest me more.

Many thanks Hugo999

I’m looking forward to seeing how you handle Gwen, assuming the regen will cure her endometriosis. And it would be consistent with the vaccine’s paradigm that whatever meds she was considering won’t work in suppressing her desire for pain-free mind blowing sex.

The psychological...

Brilliant piece of writing twisting plots like this!

All that work just to grow old with the hoe that gleefully cuckolded him.

Ah well, it's from the cuckolds are more noble group.

Shoulda known.

Thanks. 5*, "THIS LURKER" ( who read, but can not write without spellchecker every 5 words), understands as an amateur, the outside world takes must be your priority. You will get things sorted out. BUT, we will still wait for the next episode of your storyline on bended knees....

Why am I still getting cuckold vbes. Maybe because he is still cuddling her?

She doesn't deserve comfort.