Recent reader comments on First Time sex stories.
Cute, cute, cute...funny, entertaining, and well-detailed!!
The whole thing works so well, that they became friends first, while their feelings for each other 🥰 grow stronger and deeper.
The whole two virgins thing was priceless...and they continue to learn, together, with a future...
All Comments/ReplyFirst of yours I’ve found, I’m off to read your back catalogue, thanks!
All Comments/ReplyPlease continue
All Comments/ReplyLove it
All Comments/ReplyGreat story and awesome sexual twist on the freaky Friday thing!
All Comments/ReplyThat story made me so hard. Desperately need to cum now. Thank you. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
All Comments/ReplySadly more confusing than erotic.
All Comments/ReplyI am 80 yrs. I met my wife when she was 16 and I, 21. We found our way like the people in your story. We married when she was 18, had 5 children. It's been 53 years. Some dreams do come true.
All Comments/ReplyNo writing of any kind has been mentioned on her Facebook for weeks now but still tons of war stuff and asinine photos are posted daily or almost daily so she's alive.
All Comments/ReplyWhat a great trilogy. The characters are real to me. You take the characters to places that I did not expect, but I am very pleased to be a part of that journey.
Please continue to write about the Sister. Such a great story line.
Thank you for your stories.
All Comments/ReplyRead and just commented on “The Office” (enjoyed), so am returning to this piece — not sure why I didn’t comment initially because I thought the piece intriguing. Bit surprised by some comments, because I found the first person approach easy to follow while it sustained/even escalated...
All Comments/ReplyThe back and forth of now I'm male now I'm female destroys any continuity, and thus any interest. That, combined with the lack of character(s) and lack of tension makes this a futile read, I'm afraid. I'd start all over again, past tense, one narrator, and a more interesting plot.
All Comments/ReplyNice piece of writing. Good for all of them
All Comments/ReplyWell written but the knowing there was a husband sitting at home while she was fucking some kid ruined it for me.
All Comments/ReplyOne of the best’s stories on Literotica. Great read
All Comments/ReplyBTW: This is written in second person, which is stupid because it's like telling the subject what they already know because they lived through it.
All Comments/ReplyIt is a great story it runs parallel with with happened to my dating life for some of the time. brought me back to a kinder gentler time.Remembering all the firsts, and wonderful memories of being a teen
All Comments/ReplyRapierwit24601, I appreciate your feedback and insight. I agree with your comments and if I were writing a novel which I've done previously I would definitely follow your second comment but these short stories I post here are strictly for entertainment. They can be used by the reader...
All Comments/ReplyAh, a true cumming of age story! 😂
All Comments/ReplyAuthor notes that the story is written 1st person. It's damn confusing when the 1st person keeps switching.
All Comments/ReplyHate stories written first person. Use names not pronouns!
All Comments/ReplyHate first person stories. It's impersonal. I like stories with names, not pronouns! J/S.
All Comments/ReplyThe nerd gets the hot cheerleader. Every average guy's dream. And he was her first - and only I guess. Let's hope there's no cheating and she remains an actual loving wife, just to complete the fantasy. :)
All Comments/ReplyWell done. Teanage angst to the next level.
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All Comments/ReplyThis kind of second person narrative makes me crazy. Narrator cannot possibly know what I'm thinking, nor what I'm doing when I'm not there. And telling me things that have happened to me, or that I've already done is an annoying waste of time. Why would you do that? I cut bait after...
All Comments/ReplyThis was very enjoyable as an erotic story. It could be a better story with a little editing. Too many minor, inconsequential details and explanations.
All Comments/ReplyI like your detailed decriptions. You are a very talented writer. Keep writing, please.
All Comments/ReplyYou’re a noob, so I’ll be gentile.
Present tense is BY FAR the worst way for an amateur writer to structure a story. Many pros have failed at that. Past tense is simpler and more natural for writer and reader.
Backstory, subtext and prior character development go along way to...
All Comments/ReplyThank you for your detailed analysis.
Kindly have a read of my other story too. I would love to hear your comments and feedback on that too.
Warm regards
All Comments/ReplyI really like this story, and hope you wiwll continue it
All Comments/ReplyReally very well written and extremely arousing. A lovely description of awakening.
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