Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Im really interested in this story, hope you continue it further.

@Voxman314 - the horse was meant to be kinda uncomfortable, also stressing that the women’s work wasn’t all fun and games. Glad you approve of the language 😊 Emily

@Voxman314 - thank you, that’s a big compliment 😊 Emily

Brilliant. My only oof moment was the horse, but this was top tier sci fi adventure.

A rare amount of notes and engagement is impressive as well. Thank you.

Love your scories

To have a physical connection and not allow a deeper connection to form, is something I've been trying for a long time now... (sigh)...

"...the use of pediments, entablatures, and columns in judicial erections was a fundamental constant of Nature."

"...hung in the air much like bricks don't."

lol

Absolutely loved it !!!

I don't mind the trans content. It makes for interesting reading, the combined transformation of Chris and the transformation of Nea are helpful in thinking about the ethical issues. Ethics are not always rational but are often formed by feelings and experiences.

Great chapter and...

I read BW:M-tH last night, and liked it enough to want it to continue. I'm also glad to hear about another chapter of The Witch's Offering. Two thumbs up.

Excellent chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.

Highly creative and hot with it!!

Excellent chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. Hopefully Greg will finally clear this dungeon and get some good rewards. Keep up the good work.

Thank you you're are an amazing writer.Cant wait for the next chapters

Please continue this story it’s really good

This was a fun one! Hopefully there's more to come. 🍻

Wow, what a brain that made this. This is the best combination of top tier SF and smut.

Truly good sexy sci fi in paper form is way too rare, but one I recommend is Waves, by M A Foster.

Great descriptions. My only disappointment was that our man passed out. A great writer like you needn't fall for this cop out. 5 stars tho because it was original and well written.

Another excellent chapter, I'm really looking forward to seeing how he manages to fix his magic input vs. output problem.

Girls don’t have dicks.

Best Si-fi I have had the pleasure of reading in many months. Thank you!

This feels like a dnd world I'd love to explore, please keep writing more you have no idea how happy I was to see chapter 2

Stupid

Great story, just like QT! Thank you!

You need an editor. The were many inconsistencies in descriptions. The egg goes from being the size of a golf ball to the size of a baseball. The scene with the dad, go s from being clearly visible in the dark light 5 feet from Jacob, to silhouettes in motion immediately after a naked...

Is the militia to be put into the field before the Bunker is populated? Or twenty years later, after the impact? Or may the militia do sorties from the Bunker(s; 3 if I recall correctly?) during the twenty years in the Bunker?

This feels like being stuck in the tutorial level of a video game — the pages dedicated to the magic practicing in the grotto, the passive world/relationship building with verbose conversations. Have a mystery, an enemy, conspiracy or something that the characters can bond over. Read...

Next installment please. More plot, less fucking!

Just finished what you have posted on discord. Very good story so far. Not the biggest tentacle reader, but very good so far. Hope you come back to this sometime soon!

NP- best news ever. Can’t get enough of this story.

A very good start. Thanks for your time and imagination.

The General should have publicly flogged, and then hanged the weasel. Offer him a quick drop if he reveals his patron, and anyone else involved in the conspiracy!

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Situations like the premise of this story must be scrupulously handled without any bias or favoritism whatsoever. Otherwise,...

this is really cute and nice :)

I like this :D I can see lots of different potential than the standard stories!!!!

Finally, the plot moves one step forward. Iknow the story is free as are the rest of your works. I really enjoy them. I just am like a two year old, I want what I want, and I want it NOW.