Fan Fiction & Celebrity Story Comments

Looking forward to another chapter! I love your work! Imogene is on a mission! :)

I'm not a doctor. And I don't play one on TV. But if Cheryl did not suffer a potentially fatal tear in her anus this time,

she is going to have one if she continues to subject herself to this treatment. At best, Cheryl can look forward to total loss of control of her bowels as she...

Great choice in celebrity poontang!!

Reading how you write Emily makes her way hotter then I've ever seen her

Need more of Charlie

I really enjoyed this. When will you post the next chapter?

Wow. This author has truly jumped the shark. It has been happening for a while, but stories like this just reinforce it. She was great once, and she will always have fans who five star her no matter what. But anyone objective will have to admit her quality has fallen significantly...

Who the hell is Cheryl as a celebrity? Nowhere in the first screenful of text do you explain what show this is fanfic of or who the hell Cheryl is. You just say that it's season seven and so everyone is over 20... SEASON SEVEN OF WHAT GODDAMNED SHOW?!? Imagine you're me... I've never...

Imogene is a despicable, self-serving person with a shortsighted goal. After one generation the vault inhabitants would be forced into incestuous relations in order to continue the generations until the outside was save enough to venture into. This would get worse with each subsequent...

I had a great reading this. Will there be a sequel?

That was hot. Love big thick girls.

Lesbians. Hot.

Need to bring her daughter into this lexi would be good

I am starting to enjoy all your stories really to the deep extent. Even getting to know this is based on the show Riverdale and character named Cheryl Blossom made it even more intense to feel the character undergo everything with such a pretty little face.

Very hot! Damn...

well worth the wait for part two, excellent, horny and well written, great stuff

Wishing for the continuation of this! Tony needs to be Penny’s “sugar grandpa”! More please?

Derivative, formulaic, self-serving…all of your stories in this genre involve anal almost exclusively. Your writing has stagnated. BTW, degradation and humiliation are not synonymous with love. One commenter asked where’s the romance gone, don’t look for it with this author. The foundation...

Удивлен, что там Кассандра и Сара)) Разве они не с Шоном? Или эти события происходят ДО выставки в Лас-Вегасе?

Я надеюсь, что автор создаёт так целостную вселенную, а не использует одних и тех же персонажей в разных ситуациях

This is so hot, Abby, you keep up the pace well and lead the reader on to a satisfying climax xxxxx

Maybe it's my own proclivity, but the strap-on activity seemed somewhat perfunctory. And I'd prefer strapless with both anal and vaginal plugs and multiple vibrators (though I think this story pre-dates them) which entail both more effort and more sensation on the part of the giver....

I love it!

I really enjoyed this story. Didn’t realize I had a diaper fetish. That was so hot! Instant erection for this guy!

This is the best of all the Sexfight matches!

Two of my favorite actresses. Thank you for sharing

I like short quick stories like this. Keep ‘em coming.

Very exciting! I love the whole Celebrity Sexfight series! Please bring us more!

Squirting really turns me on! I’m glad you seem to be fascinated with it also. Please give us more stories like this,

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Если честно, то удивляет, что девушки в этой сфере имеют узкие влагалища и так легко кончают. Не хочу выглядеть ханжой или ретроградом, но я почему-то думаю, что узкими эти части тел уже точно быть не могут, ну а про чувствительность и говорить странно. При их активности чувствительность...

What a shame you hate yourself so much. You write pretty good stories, so you clearly have talent. Pity you have such self loathing. 1*

@CapnH00k Thanks for the kind words! Agreed about the length. I like to post a complete story rather than chapter by chapter because, while I don't think every chapter of a story needs a sex scene, there should be a sex scene in anything you're going to post here, and I didn't feel...

Keep up the good work

Looking forward to part two.

Yet another wherein I couldn't even finish the first Page due to all of the mistakes, mainly punctuation.

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