Exhibitionist & Voyeur Story Comments

That was REALLY good. I'm loving Chloe so far. Admittedly I wish she had walked into the office while the protagonist was sitting there naked to retrive the clothes. But I understand that you're probably building Chloe up slowly. I honestly hope Chloe and the protagonist get together...

Been working on a story for the Geek Pride Challenge coming out this month, taking most of my attention.

I dare to predict if you like this series, you'll appreciate that story a lot, too. And maybe be reconciled for the slower progress on Bonobo World. ;) Keep your eyes open.

So hot. Love when daddy takes what he deserves

What a nice job experience I would it

sexy teachers are on nude beach sign me up

Beautifully crafted story. Delicate, subtle and refreshingly understated sex and body description.

What a great series can't wait for next chapter. Its nice to have a story that's fun and erotic without becoming sleazy or nasty. Please keep that fun tone to future chapters. If you do include Duncan please keep it just like the scenes with Glen, fun and very erotic. Looking forward...

Another cracking 5⭐. 🥇 quality if there ever was one!

So looking forward to the next story and dreading it being the last story!

Was off to a good start, but after the ending I heard Peggy Lee's "Is that all there is?" playing in my head...

Very hot and very realistic. This is very similar to my wife's journey into the lifestyle. Sometimes it's two steps forward and one step back, other times it's one forward and two back. It's a lot of fun, but there are also a lot of emotions early on.

Really entertaining fantasy and story. So very hot!

Please update this, it's very well written.

@Ecoboat70 fifth paragraph: "They had gotten seats next to each other in the second row of the cockpit."

That was a great voyeurism story

Terrific finale! One big happy family!

That is so well written, slowly building up, loved the bit where Duncan touched her, maybe a dirty old man or even men could get to touch her & make her cum?

I'm English and even I know it's spelled Havasu.

Where is that part 2 dan?:p need some inspiration?

Looking forward to the next chapter

Keep the chapters coming and cumming...

Hot! She seems very innocent for a HS girl. She needs to be sexed up a bit. Otherwise, great. 5/5

I'll tell you what category NON CONSENT, she said she didn't want to and bitch Vanessa pushed, that did it for me. What a fucked up anniversary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And most husbands would not go for this either, page 3 and done

Ignore anon comment Emily. So fun reading your updates. What a beautiful detailed story. I hope for more toilet adventures from you!

Okay I have to say- this is an EXCELLENT series but it is proceeding ridiculously slowly. Its alright to have mainly world building stuff without plot progression (the plot anyway is not necessarily the point of an erotica), but you release TINY chapters after ages.

So glad to read a story about a woman posing nude and not fucking the artist!

The literarary equivalent of blue balls, no finish and no idea if there will be

Frankly nothing pisses me off more than wasting my time reading a good story from start to finish and NO FINISH, it's one thing to know more chapters are coming, that's like coitus Interuptus, but seeing...

As a woman, I didn’t expect that any other woman actually thinks like me. I love them this age too. So delightful.

My cock was hard beginning to end

"This is a bit long."

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4 Literotica pages (~30 in Word) is a bit long. 9 pages and only chapter 1 is a monstrosity.

So good, but this Terry is really a insensitive prick and no good for the lifestyle. Boundaries needs to be respected else it is just rape...

The only times my wife ever danced nude in front of strangers, it was always in a pub or bar, late at night, when completely unexpected. Not a strip joint, so nobody was expecting this nice looking 30-year old woman to hop up on the table top or the bar and strip off just for the...

Ummmm hey honey? Yeah, this marriage thing isn’t working so well for me. She wants to fuck his friend which we know is the way to go when attempting to ruin a marriage. Sex not the most important thing in a marriage but again, I didn’t realize this whole married thing doesn’t allow...

I agree with mattenw ~ no guy would just blithely go along with this. And, there are photos and videos from every party? What happens when someone is going through a divorce and his pictures and videos all end up on the internet from a vindictive ex-wife? Better scenario is one month...

Really enjoyed this story. The combination of the protagonist playing with fire and making bad decisions with the surrender of control (be it to chance or to a tormentor) and ultimatively the protagonists downfall is just so incredibly hot. I love unfair bets and predicaments with...

The most common type of malfunction is a bikini top coming. Malfunctions are more likely to happen when swimming in rough water or when doing activities that involve a lot of movement like diving into a pool. By cutting the threads on her top one at a time was perfect. He must...