Poetry Comments & Feedback

nicely done, a nice image of desire

You write beautifully, thank you for sharing part of yourself with us.

Maybe it's sex. Maybe it's love.

But it certainly is fun!

Hard to read, knowing you were hurting. Honest and brave honey xxx

Thank you Pixie x

Amazing

Breathtaking in its mixture of basic carnal needs combined with such evocative words that come alive. Well done

Your personification of Nature is sensuous and intimate.

Well done!

Mythical proportions of lust and carnal consummation!

Love it!

Ommmggggggg omg l love 💕 it. It’s exactly how I feel due this being my secret, I feel so constrained but when I’m chatting with my new friends omgg the sex was to explode out of me.. omg

Kellie 💜🩷❤️

Sweet.

Moving on, Growing up.

What doth youth know of depth beyond a mirrors 1D lie?

Last night, she held the broomsword, while her corpulent knight tried to budge the fridge.

Two shriekers as the four inch dragon raced, all too successfuly, for its cave of safety below the cabinets....

You have raised my pulse with this one, DampKitten.

Sweet, romantic & beautiful.

I love poems like this that make me think. Well written. Really deep & profound.

Incredibly tranquil & beautiful.

Reminds me of the way things are right now. Dark.

Really incredible. I love this.

This made me hurt & cry.

Reminds me of too many memories I'm trying to forget.

She's just a young girl, so full of life,

But she's drawn to an older man's strife.

She likes it when he takes her in his arms,

And shows her all his worldly charms.

He knows just how to make her feel,

His touch, his kiss, it's all so real.

She craves his love in so many ways,

And...

Sad. You made my eyes begin to water.

xoxo

Very nice.

Another perfect example of your prowess. A tease, a glimpse, a hint, things left unsaid, makes us yearn for more of you

Ah ... the visual images !

... you have done it again.

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take care, stay safe levi

such great turns of phrase. "Daddy's never seen/his little girl/ride a seahorse so hard." W.H. Auden could never!

Discovered your work through reading another author; glad for that. Very moving, thought provoking erotic poem. Loved the “turn” and the complementary nature of your lines around strengths and weaknesses. Beautiful poem.

Liked the title — perfect for the mix of metaphorical images you create. Any number of lines so captivating “…like twisted sea dreads…”. Last two stanzas put smile on one’s face. Not sure why FUCK is capitalized — curious; certainly does not detract. Like your poetry.

Lovely.

Beautiful

“caressed and kissed“

I love it.

I like the air of submission in this poem.

Wow! I love the ocean theme. Beautiful sex.

such vivid imagery . beautiful.

So erotic xxx

You're writing is still incredible