NonHuman Story Comments

I can't believe I didn't favorite this the first three times I read it! Didn't repeat the mistake this time.

Well, it looks like Dana is going to face more of a hurdle than originally expected. I hope the house's enchantments are prepared for the challenge.

Hmmmm.....it's almost like something about the house is calling to Dana. Is she fully human? Or is the magic of the house, recognizing that Mike may be the last of his bloodline, 'helping' him to find someone to ensure the bloodline continues? Any sufficiently advanced nest of...

You're doing a great job with you monster girl designs. They truly feel like something different, and you even manage to capture glimpses into cultures that are truly 'alien' to humans (something that most Western authors seem to fail at horribly, even when the designs are good).

A good idea, but as usual, poorly executed. Get your clicks my dude,

Excellent!!!! Now that I've caught up everything to 114 of the HFHM world (and can't wait for it to continue), I find myself hoping that you'll put a small loop into Eulalie's web by giving Hannah a little cameo in HFHM. Meeting up with Eulalie in a chance outting and recognizing...

Finally, someone who can do a non-human/monster character who isn't just a Star Trek grade alien (aka. a human in simple cosmetic prosthetics). It is much appreciated by xenophiles like myself.

Truly enjoy reading your story, just wish they were a little longer

Well, they know they are being thrown under the bus by the director. He has someone with top abilities to sneak in on Torie. Clearly older I would say since any around when Torie was brought in or since, Torie would know. Whoever it was, was either removed from the records before...

Loved the profound concept behind the story. The craving for companion. What would we allow ourselves to do just not to be alone. What is that new world bringing ? Sex is about pleasure, but it's also about relationship.

Would you go on further on that new world in another story,...

oh thank god I WAS SO WORRIED 😫

So hot !!! So weird !! So unnatural !!! LOVED IT !!! I'll be waiting for the next part!!

I've almost could see Bella Ramsey starring this story

Don't let us in doubt of what happened next !!

Wow, wow, wow ... Just WOW! Thanks for sharing this great storie, I loved every bit of it!

love it. The feel is wonderful

I have read so many different stories on here and must say I am a purveyor for the finer points in the story lines, this one really struck me (if only there was ever a suit, I believe that I’d wear it without a doubt), I will book mark this so I can read it over and over again as...

Another weak outline.

We don't care about his race or his porn interests. He is the main character of the world burning. And his response is to dump his family and escape into porn???? Then just run when the zombies come for him.

How does he survive?

Why did the family dog follow...

Of all the stories I've read of Monster Girls I have never read one about a frog girl who used a Boy/Man to get his seed to fertilize her clutch of eggs.But don't think I am criticizing this story,just the opposite.I mean to have a girl who is a frog just decide to have sex with a...

Thank you. I don’t think anyone expects to be remembered in an erotic storytelling, but you did it well, and tied in with current events. Always 5 stars, but this chapter went above and beyond.

This is hall of fame? It was decent for what I’d consider more of an essay than even a short story, but it seems pretty choppy. I’m guessing catering to the agenda helped.

I believe the sum total of resorts on Irish islands is zero, because they are bleak, cold, wet, and windswept.

So hot

More, more, more please!

This is by far the most captivating story I’ve read on this site, and some of the best demon-among-humans world building I’ve read period. I understand wanting to make it better, it seems like it’s developed into a real passion project, I just hope it doesn’t lose the edge that makes...

Great story, a good warm up for a series that could have the tentacle creature & her in different positions around her place.

Me personally would like to see her with either the woman or trans & the tentacle creature having a great 3way. But that’s just me..

Still great story.

Add one more story on knot county :)

Eat yer damn veggies? Spoken like a true Mom, Miss Annabelle! Future me has come back to re-read the HFHM series and noticed that bit in the outro…one more thing to love about your writing. As I am working my way back towards 2024 I’ve picked up on a few errors here and there but...

It's really good. I wish there was more!

This was one of the best chapters. Really enjoy the battle and thought you put into it. You really do a lot of research into the story line. Keep up the good work.

I loved Rikki-Tikki-Tavi as a child. You are an excellent author, well able to evoke emotions and write interesting tales! I very much have enjoyed reading this story and those leading up to it!

Oof. Yeah, I think this is where I dropped the story last time I started it. Was headed to the annoyingly dramatic already, but a cad molesting and abusing her doesn’t equal a mating mark in any kind of canon. It’s just infuriating. Thomas obviously should have been eliminated.

Fantastic writing and storyline, even if the characters of Beth and Velvet are just getting more stupid. Beth seems to be just more a whore, never able to just say no to cocks. Velvet's behaviour is so silly she should just be Leeds stupid pet. Doesen't got much active braincells,...

Please get a proofreader! The story has good bones but it's so poorly written that it was difficult to read and enjoy.

Great short story!

Crumbs it’s the TARDIS!! :-)

Best one yet in this Jack series. Thank you.