Group Sex Story Comments

This author has a few cliff hangers now in the story series category.

Shame. sigh

Hmm enjoying the story and hoping the author continues, but seeing other similarly hung stories, it doesn't look good. Hoping I'm wrong.

Good thought. There will be a sequel, 'Joni's Next Job'. A black office where that might work in.

I think Joni is going to need some help soon. Perhaps she has a female friend that also needs a job?

This needs a sequel so hot

And then there were five—five girls, five lovers, and five ⭐️s. I wish I could be a Chicago resident and vote early and often. This chapter, for me, is top three in the hallowed halls of the BTC.

Story was good, but the writing lacked maturity. See if you can find an editor who can help you develop. Look up possessive apostrophes - most of yours were missing, which makes reading difficult. Short sentences, while better than too long ones, are to be used in moderation. I...

If this were Dungeons & Dragons then Belle would be a Chaotic character. At first I was going to say Chaotic Good, but upon reflection perhaps she is Chaotic Neutral. Not always sure I like her, even though originally she was my favorite.

But still I am happy to see the BTC continued...

I liked it. Well written.

I'm confused why the chapters stopped. I real shame.

hot fantasy where's the rest?

Shows a very interesting imagination, sort of jealous of Matty. I do however wonder why they wake up with bed clothes on?

Wow! That was fun! Find the comments almost ... funny. One complains about the lack of personalities of the participants. Well, most of Ray's and Ginger's personalities and traits are definitely in chapter 1 so, if this is stand-alone, have to agree with that comment. Robby and...

This is my new favorite one. Hot and sweet with full characters. I also want to commend you for writing Black characters as normal people. So much racist fetishism on this site. Your writing is refreshing. Thank you.

Aaarrggghhhhh!!!!!!!! Stop with the cliffhangers!!! It's rude,unfair,twisted and downright despicable. Next please ???

Good start looking forward to see where it goes

Luv that you guys have come back to write more of this story. Keep up the great work!

Helgamite, you are welcome. It's always a pleasure finding the kind of story one likes, especially when most of the days the stories published are the kind of stories I don't like (the ones with swinging, swapping, consenting cuckolds...).

Great story

Loved it. I could imagin such a visit for a well endowed male

Great start - welcome to the party! Thanks for writing.

Yummy! Exactly what I LOVE but don't get to experience. I shave from neck to thighs (closeted so must keep up appearances) I'm hoping, one day, to go full Brazilian, nothing more pleasurable than a completely smooth guy, especially when he's wearing a thong! Unfortunately, most guys...

Liked this a lot, and I thought the description of the initial polygamous sex among the three of them was very hot...

...it described well what is a common fantasy of many people, both men and women.

Now the challenge sould be to write a similar story that would be about an MMF relationship,...

I loved this story, thank you so much for posting it. I know I'll come back to it many times.

Loved it!! Very realistic depiction of a woman's first-time with another woman. And one was a redhead, so bonus points for that. 😆

My kind of story, absolutely. I believe that Brad would have known that they were swingers before the road trip though.

Erica sounded totally hot. That Matt was bisexual didn't bother me a bit.

I've fantasized double vaginal in my wife and feeling a guy's cock rubbing up against mine....

Your stories are incredible. Thank you for the work you put it. This is my first comment btw :)

Well Damn. Don't stop now. Bring your recently divorced sister into your little harem & all 4 of you continue fucking! Keep this rolling. 5☆

Talk about a cliffhanger.... another 10/10 and I'm so ready for the next part you wouldn't believe it

Sweet and sexy story about good friends sharing their bodies, their orgasms and good times. Thanks!

One note sounded a bit off: I've double-fucked my wife's pussy with a good friend a number of times, and never has one of us two men gone off that the other didn't go off almost simultaneously....

Oh no! You can't end it there.

Sorry, did not finish. White wines are never served at room temperature. And you fill 4 glasses with one bottle. And I have never got a buzz from one glass of wine. But the story was excellent.

Great story. Very few mistakes. Grammar and spelling were good. It really irritates me when a story has 40 or 50 misspelled words. You were off on the wine.

Really well written. Write more!

Can't decide if this was awkwardly translated from another language, or just a mediocre job of a story-generator.