Loving Wives Story Comments

10 Big Blazing stars for a good read about a drunk entitled promiscuous whore that keeps her BF in 'blue balls' to trick him into letting her fuck another guy. I am glad that he broke up with the whore. She was NOT marriage material but she was a hot slut good for college gang bangs....

You made this a bit too convoluted. The drowning death was just so clearly a device to get to the ending you wanted from the second page forward. Rather than a roller coaster with a thrilling plot, this felt like a tired merry -go-round.

You remind me of the the one eyed dog with three feet and a cut off tail who answered to the name "LUCKY".

So you loved that woman? BULLSHIT!

SORRY, BUT THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT THAT STATEMENT IS--BULLSHIT! You have no idea what love is.

Almost unbelievable yet I could see it happening as well, sadly.

Not to nit-pic but did you notice this is supposed to be a story about wives who go outside their marriage? Unless I missed something these people were simply living together and there is, or at least should be, a big difference between a guy's reaction to a wife cheating and a...

Funny as.

Good one.

Good drama and good story about a horrible woman.

Sometimes these stories need the cheater received a slap in the face. Like at the anniversary party, when Jenny's revealing her long history of betrayal, the wife of one her lovers punctuates the confession with a vicious slap to...

Oh you made this that bit better than the normal of these rich men with more money and a really clever woman who can't put anything out of her mind than a strange cock.

I liked the payback, oh letting the wife back will pull a lot of criticism from the BTB types reading, or just commenting...

Didn't say how the revenge was facilitated but it got the job done. Guess if you play with fire long enough you'll get burned, and she did.

...and the plot thickens! Great fun. Can't wait for the next. thanks

Nice story. Thank you! I love how you dropped in the first warning sign early on: she didn't exclusivity, she want to give up "dating but not dating" her guy friends. When I read that I thought she was just being insecure but clearly it went much deeper.

Well it is fiction after all. Not sure why he went after her father, the brother i can understand.

I liked the story, and how it worked out. I thought that Kelly was the adult in the room. What she did was very risky for her relationship with Henry, who for eight years had made an existence of self-pity, bitterness, and hate. Luckily for him Kelly forced him to confront himself,...

Revisit after a while, I've increased to a five.

Great story, loved it.

Predictable but all the more amusing for that. 5 stars

Nicely written, plot is an old friend on here, big powerful man with lots of money, and stupid wife that was meant to have a brain between her ears, not her pussy, but a nice enough go at it.

Sorry, this one's a loser.

Fabulous short piece!

Hmm...

I liked this story. Ray did not own Josie, he had no right to “punish” her, even as she was more and more replacing him with Luke. Ray’s leaving was an appropriate response, and finding a new person to spend his last years with was a bonus. Josie made her choice and so did Ray. Forty...

Well, a different approach again.

Love it!

Hee hee hee

Yup, hook, line and sinker!

Vivat Texas ! 5*

Good one.

Well done I enjoyed it

Yup, liked that version too!

That was Great!! Loved it!!

Some people have no imagination. The end was perfectly clear in fact I expected it from the start. Well done.

Ok, one of the better representations of this story.

Nice way that you tied up the lose ends.

Good read ST1956, I enjoy all the twist additional writers put to the FebSux story. Yours at the top percentage of the list. The reaction of the readers of the various stories Is usually entertaining also. It also intrigues me, the people who complain about the additional rewrites...